Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not . Discuss both views and give opinion.

Over the years the life of people become modern and easier.
one
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One
of the trends
nowadays are
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nowadays is
fast foods where we can see anywhere even global. It it
becomming
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is becoming
becoming
becomes
one
of the largest growing industry. It gives complimentary to everyone. While others does not. The
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discuss the both views and opinion. Nowadays, fast
food
are
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is
one
of the trends and it gives a positive feeling to people. As we can see people nowadays become busier
to
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with
thier
of them or themselves
their
work and they have no time to cook at
home
.
base
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Base
on
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of
in
the survey globally 80% of people buying foods outside
such
as fast foods. It is accessible,
lesser
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
time, can give
enjoyment feeling
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an enjoyment feeling
the enjoyment feeling
for the
customes
someone who pays for goods or services
customer
customs
.
For example
jollibee
is
one
of the popular in the world. Because of its texture, taste and has a
complimentary
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compliment
to
people mostly
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people, mostly
for
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
and even for adults and it is constantly rising. And people accustomed to eat in fast
food
until now. Some others
doest
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does
not. Because sometimes it
cause
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causes
a bad effect to our health which the accumulated fats in our body will not burn because of our unhealthy
food
without getting vitamins and nutritions for those fast foods that we eat. It can affect
also
to our life where many people accustom
to eat
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to eating
outside even holidays.
for
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For
those
old
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older
people they find a vegetables foods where is cooking at
home
. Many other says it is a big different to
cooked
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cook
at
home
rather than to go to
fast foods restaurant
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a fast food restaurant
fast food restaurant
fast food restaurants
can
gives
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give
a
happiness
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happy
feeling to the family where they can
spent
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spend
time at
home
together. In my opinion, I've
notice
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noticed
fast foods are already
gives
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giving
given
a
complimentary
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compliment
to people since when there was a
kids
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kid
. But sometimes they should
knowing
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know
the
thier
of them or themselves
their
limit to eat outsides. Because it could be
possible to gives
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possible, giving
possible giving
them an ailment
to
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of
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
body.
Especailly
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Especially
Specially
for those
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
that they have a
limitations
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limitation
when to eat outside. It is important to eat a
vegetarians
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vegetarian
food
rather than to unhealthy and we need to take care our health to prevent
ailment
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the ailment
ailments
while it is early.
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