Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, most of people have passed the
time
on the television, particularly watching sports channels at their free
time
.
This
essay agrees that the watching sports
channel
takes away valuable
time
and the channels does not improve beneficial affection. In the new century, people need more
time
in their rush lives,
thus
the
time
is the most important part of our lifestyle.
For instance
, the majority cannot find any
time
for improving their personal skills.  
Thus
, some employers working too many hours until gaining more free
time
.
Therefore
, they can find a personal education,
such
as learning a language, listening to some beneficial music or discovering special subjects about their jobs in the library. The
second
effect is the using
time
proactively. Two beneficial preferences pass
time
tv or without tv.
First
and important part of watching tv is
channel
preferences.
For instance
, the
channel
number size is huge and the viewer should find out trusted
channel
such
as documentaries, sci-fi, and news which teaches new information about life. The
second
preference is out of television, which is extended with human social interest,
such
as promenade
time
in the parks, playing poker, drinking alcohol with friendships, walking on coastal and watching skies. A recent study has shown that watching sports
channel
has an effect on brain cells rather than other activities. In short, our important life is very short for wasting of
time
, particularly watching sport channels.
Moreover
, we steer our
time
to beneficial activities to improve our personal skills.

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