Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent days, most of people have passed the
time
on the television, particularly watching sports channels at their free time
. This
essay agrees that the watching sports channel
takes away valuable time
and the channels does not improve beneficial affection.
In the new century, people need more time
in their rush lives, thus
the time
is the most important part of our lifestyle. For instance
, the majority cannot find any time
for improving their personal skills. Thus
, some employers working too many hours until gaining more free time
. Therefore
, they can find a personal education, such
as learning a language, listening to some beneficial music or discovering special subjects about their jobs in the library.
The second
effect is the using time
proactively. Two beneficial preferences pass time
tv or without tv. First
and important part of watching tv is channel
preferences. For instance
, the channel
number size is huge and the viewer should find out trusted channel
such
as documentaries, sci-fi, and news which teaches new information about life. The second
preference is out of television, which is extended with human social interest, such
as promenade time
in the parks, playing poker, drinking alcohol with friendships, walking on coastal and watching skies. A recent study has shown that watching sports channel
has an effect on brain cells rather than other activities.
In short, our important life is very short for wasting of time
, particularly watching sport channels. Moreover
, we steer our time
to beneficial activities to improve our personal skills.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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