You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you doing well. Yesterday I saw a brochure
along with
a morning newspaper for a one-week walking tour in the mountains.
I felt too much excitement when I saw the brochure because I, love mountains and walking on uneven tracks is my favourite hobby. I, try to manage my time for a daily walks
and if I have spare time, Correct the article-noun agreement
daily walks
a daily walk
then
walking on the tracks is my preferred choice That is
why I can't imagine missing the opportunity, you are going to provide people like me. Please share more details about the procedure and requirements of the event.
One more thing I, want to explain is that I have some problems regarding my health. According to
my doctor's advice, I should avoid hiking but can do a walk on a smooth track.
I feel disappointment
because I don't want to miss Replace the word
disappointed
such
a golden opportunity. I hope this
will be a historical event for the people who love nature and adventure.
I'll try my best to join this
venture.
Yours Sincerely,
KunwarSubmitted by computersinn2007 on
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task achievement
Be sure to directly address all parts of the prompt in a clear and structured manner. Your letter should express why you are interested, ask for dates and prices, and express fitness concerns explicitly.
coherence cohesion
Your letter's structure could be more cohesive. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea. Introduce your letter with a greeting, follow with paragraphs addressing each of the letter's requirements, and conclude with an appropriate closing.
task achievement
Maintain a suitable tone throughout your letter. For formal inquiries, avoid overly casual phrases and ensure polite language. Use conditional structures to politely make requests or express concerns.