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Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spen a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

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The
Film
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 industry has grown significantly over the
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 few decades and some companies allocate a colossal budget to produce just one
movie
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. Personally, I do not believe that the quality of the
movie
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 depends on how much money was spent on it. Rather, what matters are the storyline and the talent of the actors and other people associated with the
movie
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. Producing a
film
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 is definitely a process which requires a lot of money. Costumes, cameras, make up and exotic locations are all components of a regular
movie
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 and for sure cost a fortune.
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, producers overspend when producing a
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 and incur unnecessary expenses to add special effects expecting that in
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 way they will enrich the
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. Yet these are not the key factors that determine if the
movie
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 is good enough or not.
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, the storyline plays the most vital role in the success of a
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. If the script is not strong enough to attract the audience, making a
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 on it is undoubtedly fruitless and will have devastating results.
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, choosing the actors who suit the role they are playing is
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 imperative. Many
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 stars have become instrumental in producing legendary movies because of their talent and their incredible ability to enact the characters in the most realistic way.
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, movies of hugely popular actors like Tom Cruise become successful regardless of their storyline or budget. To conclude,
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film
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 production needs a huge chunk of money, it is not the key factor in making the
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 successful as the story, the acting and the direction are equally if not more important.

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