News Stories on TV and in News are very often accompanied by Pictures. Some people say these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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It is commonly believed that one of the effective ways to communicate information is using pictures.

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method is already being practiced by news agencies

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as electronic or print media. In my opinion,

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, I believe that using only pictures, without some written description, is not very effective rather using a combination of pictures with words, describing that picture, is a better approach to communicate a piece of information.

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, as every person has different level of intellect and understanding, so visuals are interpreted differently by each person,

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, the intended purpose of the image may not be understood by everyone.

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, people who are suffering from diseases like colorblindness may not be able to fully decipher the intended meaning of the photos,

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, they would be misguided. Albeit, visual images have some benefits as well,

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as pictures are easier to remember than words.

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, using pictures complex topics can be explained in a lucid way,

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, students are more likely to grasp the concepts.

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, teachers usually prefer visual aid in their slides to make their lecture more understandable. In order to attract customers or readers, using pictures is considered to be much more effective technique than relying merely on words,

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is yet another advantage of images. To conclude,

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including picture has some benefits, using it without words makes it less effective and at times it may get people misguided.

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, words and pictures are both equally important for conveying stories in an effective manner.

Wed Sep 18 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

253 words

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News Stories on TV and in News are very often accompanied by Pictures. Some people say these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important.

Older generation often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Topic: Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

Goverments around the world are spending billions in support of space programs. This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health. Do you agree or disagree?