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Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.

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For a long time everyone assumed that the mother-
child
 bond is the most important relationship in a
child
's life. But fathers play a vital role in any
child
's life. Protection, love and the bond between a father and a
child
 is special as much as the bond between a mother and a
child
.
Besides
 that a
child
 needs affection from both of his parents while growing up,
therefore
 my opinion is that fatherhood is just as important as motherhood. Earlier days people used to think that it is a woman's duty to raise children, and the man's responsibility is to support the family financially. But
that is
 not true anymore. Nowadays women are financially strong and
equal just
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equal, just
 as men and so does the level of responsibilities they carry. In modern families when mothers are at work, or out of home, fathers take care of babies, which proves they care capable of taking care of children just like women.
In addition
, my belief is
women's decision
Suggestion
a women's decision
 on whether or not to have babies should not affect on raising the baby. While growing up, children need parents' support
on
Suggestion
for
 many things
on
Suggestion
in
at
 different stages of life. Despite the fact it's a son or a daughter, children need their fathers. In current society there seems to be many single mothers due to various factors, but being a solo mother is not a solution as the emptiness of not having a father cannot be filled by anyone else, even the mother. Not having a healthy relationship with parents might cause psychological complications and relationship failures later in their family lives. Concluding above points, it clearly states that the fatherhood is just as important as motherhood, and it should be more emphasized by the society. Lack of understanding the importance of
this
 will create unstable disturbed children,
hence
 putting the future of the children into trouble.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Equal Parenting
  • 2. Gender Roles
  • 3. Societal Expectations
  • 4. Emotional Well-being
  • 5. Psychological Development
  • 6. Legal Frameworks
  • 7. Workplace Policies
  • 8. Gender Equality
  • 9. Traditional Responsibilities
  • 10. Active Fatherhood
  • 11. Balanced Development
  • 12. Undue Burden
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