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with the rise in the popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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an increase
n the popularity of the use of the internet thereby rendering newspapers a thing of extinction as the year goes by.
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fact, as
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 has been greatly appreciated. Newspapers ha
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have brought
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table, but
ot readily accessible by the majority of the population majorly because of cost implication and the
time
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 it takes to be published. Students find it hard sometimes to get in
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a message received and understood
information
asily for their various assignments because they have to deliberately learn the skills of knowing where to get the
information
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(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
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, delivery of me
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a message
o the populace has been very fast with the help of the internet access helping many to get most of their jobs done within ve
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a very limited time frame
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 frame. Newspapers has caused so much delay in getting a very delicate message to the populace. No one needs to be present in a country to know what's happening in
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have helped
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a message received and understood
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n the happenings of the society. Though it will
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 encourage laziness as one can get
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 while laying in bed.
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, it will convey the main reason why
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 was processed.
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, it gets to the consumers and as well spreads across borders. In conclusion, messages are to be processed, easy to access and delivered on
time
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 for better execution which internet has made possible. Newspapers will never make
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