The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

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At present internet is dominating the world and human life changed in several ways
from
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for
the
last
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two decades, but
sametime
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same time
they are some negative things
also
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but overall it's going to
poitive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
trend. I will
agrue
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
argue
agreed
due to
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
many benefits are there.
Firstly
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, due to the world wide web many benefits
are there like health communication got
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is there like health communication got
is there like health communication gotten
are there like health communication got
improved a lot and medical treatment reached to the normal people and same time due to the web they can easily
identified
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identify
new problems with
solucations
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
selections
and doing the treatment through video calls
hence
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automatically
pricess
the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)
prices
process
came down to the earth as well as many illness
patines
a person who requires medical care
patients
patterns
are recovered.
Secondly
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, Product information
,
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,
for purchasing new things everyone depending on
search engine
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search engines
the search engine
to know what is the feedback, based on
this
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consumer can
analasis
an investigation of the component parts of a whole and their relations in making up the whole
analysis
and buying the product.
For Example
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,
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,
One year back USA doctors did major operation through online and the patients
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are
in Kenya
however
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the cost of
this
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is very low compare
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is very low compared
is very low compare
to direct treatment.
On the other hand
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, they are several bad things
also
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there, mainly, unwanted things and fake news
,
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,
as a speed technology all the fake news spread to
globalwide
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but no one knows what is the correct one
therefore
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in short span of time many
un
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of
in
wated
binary compound that occurs at room temperature as a clear colorless odorless tasteless liquid; freezes into ice below 0 degrees centigrade and boils above 100 degrees centigrade; widely used as a solvent
water
things are happing. On the top of that, many
fraud
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frauds
are increased like banking
hence
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certain people loosing money because they know the
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
.
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.
For Instance
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,
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,
recently in Brazil one of bank accounts are looted via websites henceforth public lost nearly five million dollars. In my opinion, I have
argud
present reasons and arguments
argued
urged
that through system many benefits are there like health
treatement
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatment
treatments
reached to rural people and easily
identifing
recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identifying
identify
new product information, but they are several bad things
also
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like online frauds and fake news forward
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
fast to global wide.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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