Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

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Criminals should never be set free, having said that, I do believe a deep investigation should be done prior to any conclusion. As we are aware, that mostly, the crimes are committed

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mere self defense

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the mere self defence

mere self defence

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needs to be proven with proper evidences. To embark on, if fixed punishments are given for similar

crimes

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crimes, then

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, you may be barking at the wrong tree, as we don't know the reason behind the act.

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, if there was a murder in a street by a woman, the court sentenced her the mentioned punishment for the crime. Later, after a thorough check, the cops find out that, she killed the man

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self defence, as he was attacking her daughter and her. In

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situation, the decision of the judge has to be in her favour,

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of the former one.

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, if any outrageous act is done with a bad

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intention, then

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they need to pay an

equavalent

a person or thing equal to another in value or measure or force or effect or significance etc

equivalent

penality

the act of punishing

penalty

. Apparently, if the citizens are well-versed with the repercussions mentioned

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a hideous work,

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most likely, the crime rate may decrease, as they know they cannot be proved innocent in any circumstances by the jury. The fear of not coming clean after a wrong doing, may cease

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acitivites

any specific behavior

activities

. Bizarrely,

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may have an impact on the people who are unknowingly involved in it, but the overall society will be impacted positively. In a nutshell, both scenarios have their pros and cons. As the criminal mind can take advantage of the law according to their

convienence

the state of being suitable or opportune

convenience

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, the authority should be vigilant in inspecting every case.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

Your opinion

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