Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

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Criminals should never be set free, having said that, I do believe a deep investigation should be done prior to any conclusion. As we are aware, that mostly, the crimes are committed

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mere self defense

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the mere self defence

mere self defence

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needs to be proven with proper evidences. To embark on, if fixed punishments are given for similar

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crimes, then

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, you may be barking at the wrong tree, as we don't know the reason behind the act.

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, if there was a murder in a street by a woman, the court sentenced her the mentioned punishment for the crime. Later, after a thorough check, the cops find out that, she killed the man

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self defence, as he was attacking her daughter and her. In

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situation, the decision of the judge has to be in her favour,

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of the former one.

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, if any outrageous act is done with a bad

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they need to pay an

equavalent

a person or thing equal to another in value or measure or force or effect or significance etc

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penality

the act of punishing

penalty

. Apparently, if the citizens are well-versed with the repercussions mentioned

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a hideous work,

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most likely, the crime rate may decrease, as they know they cannot be proved innocent in any circumstances by the jury. The fear of not coming clean after a wrong doing, may cease

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acitivites

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may have an impact on the people who are unknowingly involved in it, but the overall society will be impacted positively. In a nutshell, both scenarios have their pros and cons. As the criminal mind can take advantage of the law according to their

convienence

the state of being suitable or opportune

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, the authority should be vigilant in inspecting every case.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views.

Your opinion

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many claims that the fast-food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.do you agree or disgree.

Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advantages of this for their study outweigh the disadvantages?