Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The most important subjects are debatable in schools

now a days but

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nowadays, but

nowadays but

History

is thought to be the most important one

Suggestion

with

some people. Others,

however

, think that Science and Technology are

comparitively

in a relative manner; by comparison to something else

comparatively

more important today than before and

therefore

schools should focus

on these subjects more

Suggestion

more on these subjects

This

essay will discuss both sides and will explain why I believe Science and Technology should be given more importance. People who believe that

History

is a significant subject, strongly believe in previous achievements and inventions' significance. It is because they were invented by scientists and technologists who facilitated others lives and

that is

why their names should be mentioned in

History

books;

For instance

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the inventions like

train

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a train

for transportation or telephones for communication has helped everyone

alot

up till today.

Moreover

History

reminds people of the sacrifices their ancestors have done to give them freedom

such

Qaid

one of four children born at the same time from the same pregnancy

quad

Kid

cod

-e-Azam, who was the founder of Pakistan and he will be remembered forever in

Hisotry books

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the history books

history books

for his devotion towards his nation.

On the other hand

, those who wants to emphasize on Science and Technology subjects realises the importance of these fields. I

also

believe that these are the courses where students can learn and apply to bring huge changes in our surroundings.

For example

, good quality X-Ray machines have helped doctors diagnose diseases which were unknown for

long time

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a long time

. Yes, it is true that

History

books can mention the inventions made by famous

people but

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people, but

Science and Technology helps

student

Suggestion

students

the student

become the inventors. Our future lies mostly in science and

technology's

Suggestion

technology

research as it will help reduce diseases and make our lives more convenient by inventing new machines.

Thus

, these subjects should be more important than others. To conclude,

Hisotry

the aggregate of past events

history

persumed

take to be the case or to be true; accept without verification or proof

presumed

to be important for its valuable information about

past but

Suggestion

the past, but

the past but

I believe that Science and Technology

can not

cannot

be ignored too as they are bringing huge difference in people's life. Looking at their importance, I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

these subjects should be given more time in schools.

Thu Sep 19 2019

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