Some people are fond of buying new gadgets,phones or laptops.Is it is good or bad thing. Give your opinion.

#people #gadgets #phones #laptops

In contemporary epoch

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the inventions of gadgets

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mobiles

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computers and other technology which

leds

take somebody somewhere

leads

led

to the dependence on

this

things

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thing

in all over the world.It has been considered that it is

good thing

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a good thing

which is discussed in subsequent paragraphs with my perspective. To commence with

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there are myriad things to be shared favour of it.

First

and foremost, buying new gadgets and

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

use

very easily by people.

This

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These

gadgets

is help

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are helping

help

to send leisure time to

use

mobile to play games.

Besides

this

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mostly students and business buying the most as it is

work

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working

quickly for their work.

Furthermore

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when people buying a new

things

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thing

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it created good communication with seller.

This

gadget available offline.

In addition

this

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masses

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the masses

get more profit for their work efficiency and increase the production of industries by technology.

However

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according to my opinion

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it has both good and bad thing for buying for people.It

depend

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depends

on its

use

.How masses

use

? To Recapitulate

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it is lucid seen that

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New technology has more benefits

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but the limit usage of

this

thing is

good thing

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a good thing

for people.

Thu Sep 19 2019

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technology advancements
convenience
efficiency
productivity
status symbol
financial burden
obsession
impulsive
consumerism
sustainability
e-waste
environmentally friendly
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repairability
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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets,phones or laptops.Is it is good or bad thing. Give your opinion.

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