Some people are fond of buying new gadgets,phones or laptops.Is it is good or bad thing. Give your opinion.

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In contemporary epoch
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the inventions of gadgets
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mobiles
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computers and other technology which
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take somebody somewhere
leads
led
to the dependence on
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things
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thing
in all over the world.It has been considered that it is
good thing
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a good thing
which is discussed in subsequent paragraphs with my perspective. To commence with
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there are myriad things to be shared favour of it.
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and foremost, buying new gadgets and
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
use
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very easily by people.
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This
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These
gadgets
is help
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are helping
help
to send leisure time to
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mobile to play games.
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this
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mostly students and business buying the most as it is
work
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working
quickly for their work.
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when people buying a new
things
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thing
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it created good communication with seller.
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gadget available offline.
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to
this
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masses
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the masses
get more profit for their work efficiency and increase the production of industries by technology.
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according to my opinion
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it has both good and bad thing for buying for people.It
depend
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depends
on its
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.How masses
use
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? To Recapitulate
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it is lucid seen that
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New technology has more benefits
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but the limit usage of
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thing is
good thing
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a good thing
for people.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology advancements
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • status symbol
  • financial burden
  • obsession
  • impulsive
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • e-waste
  • environmentally friendly
  • second-hand market
  • repairability
  • upgradability
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