Nowadays, the internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?
There is no iota of doubt that, television and especially the internet have made it possible for aforementioned can arise when someone is completely innocent,
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everyday people to become a celebrity much more easily Correct article usage
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This
phenomenon is offering
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to a regular, innocent person having their life memorable. Wrong verb form
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However
, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to
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development.
To begin
with the bright side, the ability to become popular through digital media obviously leads to the opportunity to become rich and famous. Therefore
, in the past, this
was controlled by film studio executives and record labels, but now a typical person can become a star simply by word of mouth. For instance
, many popular YouTube stars became famous (and wealthy) simply by their fans sharing their content and then
things snowballed from there.
On the flip side of the coil
, there are a handful of nasty consequences as well, the dark side of Correct your spelling
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this
ease of access to fame is that it can lead to infamy for a person who maybe did not do much to justify it. For example
, a new star emerging from the internet or a TV talent show, there are myriad more instances of Everyday
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Furthermore
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as in the case of online bullying, or even when someone seeks out attention but is ruthlessly mocked for trying to do something creative.
To conclude
, an increase in the ability for people to express themselves and their creativity is an enticing thing in general. Nonetheless
, in reality
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the opportunity to become popular for the wrong reasons.Submitted by shawonbvcps on
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