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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Giving
birth
 was considered the most spiritual Intro - Heated debate on whether abortion should be made illegal or
not has become
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isn't becoming
isn't become
does not become
doesn't become
did not become
didn't become
is not becoming
 a constant battle gathering more than required attention to itself. In
this
 essay, we will talk about the why or why not laws are required around
this
 sensitive issue along with my point of view. There has been an upsurge in the number of abortions owing to
variety
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a variety
 of reasons. With advances in medical technology is has become earlier to catch any medical deformity a
child
 might develop and
hence
 parents are given a logical choice to abort. Another reason is unwelcome pregnancies where the parents are not willing to give
birth
 due to various reasons and resort to
aborting
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abort
aborts
 the fetus.
Also
, increase in crimes
such
 as rapes
have added
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has added
 to the burden, carrying a
child
 from
such
 a mishap becomes a burden for life.
Such
 decisions are personal as children born with disabilities or those who are not planned end up facing many challenges during their lifetime.
Belief
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The belief
 remains that the children are gifts from the God and it is the responsibility of the parent to protect and nurture them since their inception.
Therefore
, when the fetus is killed in the
womb it
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womb, it
 is considered a sin.
Elderly
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The elderly
 often believe kid brings in good luck for the family and one is refrained from tampering with the natural
process reproduction
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reproduction process
. As
a
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an
 adult in
child
 bearing age,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that deciding to give
birth
 to a new human or deciding not to
is
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be
 a concern that the government should refrain from developing laws around them. I am of an opinion that
such
 a decision is extremely personally and only the parents shall decide as to what is best for them In Conclusion nurturing a
child
 or deciding not to bring him into
this
 world is a personal choice, government should refrain from making any laws that curb one's right to freedom. I am of
firm belief
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the firm belief
 that if the parents are not in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of giving
birth
 to a
child
 and are not medically advised
otherwise
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otherwise, then
then
 they no law or authority have any right to stop them.
Instead
 of making abortion illegal, I would suggest that the authorities should work towards awareness contraceptive methods and avoiding un welcomed pregnancies

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