With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?

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this

modern era, sports play a very vital role in

development

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the development

of the body both as physically and mentally. Some people seem that sports should be mandatory for all degree students in

the

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The

University.

This

essay will discuss why it is important to introduce

sport

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the sport

in Universities.

To begin

with, playing

competitive game

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a competitive game

helps to improve health as well as

physical structure

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the physical structure

of pupils. They can able to give time for games in their busy schedule.

Also it

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Also, it

keeps them away from diseases.

For example

, nowadays studying

students

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students'

face problem like obesity due to lack of exercise. Probing ahead, it will enhance their skills

such

as communication skill which most important in today's world. Moving

further

, in team games they can team work and to do

hardwork

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the hard work

hard work

However

, making

sports module

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the sports module

will put a great burden on them and

also

distracted them from their study which result in

decrease

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a decrease

of their marks. Due to worry about both

study

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students

and the sport

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they can fall

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into

depression. In conclusion, as games

has

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have

many merits

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but it

also

has some

demerits but

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demerits, but

the advantages of

this

is more. I think the sports should be compulsory in Universities as

this

will improve us physically and mentally.

Thu Sep 19 2019

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