You have just spent a week with a friend on the holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday, explain that you left your wallet in their house, give them Instructions of how to send it back to you.

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Dear John, How are you and your family? I hope you all are doing well. I would like to thank you and your mum especially for allowing me to spend my Christmas holiday in your house. I really had the best week ever, and hope to see you soon. Maybe when I become good at FIFA to play against you. I was wondering if you might have seen a black wallet laying around the house. I can’t really remember where I dropped it, but the living room was the

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place I was before I left for the airport. Please will it be possible to send it to me by mail when found?

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, if you could call to let me know when exactly you will get sent so I can create time to get the wallet from the post office before it arrives. Thank you for your help and hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes Michael

Thu Sep 19 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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