More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It
is universally acknowledge
that; today’s fast paced Suggestion
is universally acknowledged
life-style
is adversely a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
lifestyles
effecting
individuals health and diseases are resistant to the latest medical practice. arousing affect
affecting
Although
, it is thought by many that we must get back to old herbal remedies. This
essay will deeply analyze
why solution of modern ailments is entirely necessary with old methods.
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
Firstly
, many advocate
that new diseases are associated with Suggestion
advocates
sedentary
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a sedentary lifestyle
sedentary lifestyle
sedentary lifestyles
life-style
. Many modern medicines are not effective and could be solely resolved by altering daily-routine rather than adding ancient herbal remedies. People remains
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remain
have remained
confine
to their daily chores and unable to spare time for physical activities in order to remain healthy. A Suggestion
confined
succinate
example proclaiming briefly giving the gist of something
succinct
this
; obesity is one of the most contentious concern
encountered with Suggestion
concerns
sedentary
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a sedentary lifestyle
sedentary lifestyle
sedentary lifestyles
life-style
, to get rid of excess body fat rigorous activities are
more effective solution to reverse Suggestion
is
this
. If normal healthy
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normal, healthy
routine including
healthy diet and exercise is adopted, Accept comma addition
routine, including
then
these health problems can be resolved, but I presume that this
does not suffice the whole cause.
One the other hand, effectiveness
of modern cure for today’s ailments is debatable and opting traditional herbal remedies are completely imperative. As these practices are testified and run from generations to generations, there is no denying in their efficacy, leaving negligible side effects to the body and effective for any age-group. Suggestion
the effectiveness
For instance
, In USA, medical professionals are prescribing traditional medicines to most of their patients suffering from weight gain due to tiring and tedious life-style
with no room for exercise, and the results were quite effective when compared with solutions available these days. Overall, with modern a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
practices
only Suggestion
practice
life style
modifications are not enough to extirpate these problems and old harmless therapy is a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
also
necessary.
To conclude, health issues are arising with desk-bound routine and not relieving with modern drugs or routine changes. I completely agree that we should bring back old traditional drug therapy.Submitted by zeerak0229 on
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