More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is universally acknowledged

that; today’s fast paced

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life-style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

is adversely

effecting

arousing affect

affecting

individuals health and diseases are resistant to the latest medical practice.

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, it is thought by many that we must get back to old herbal remedies.

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analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

why solution of modern ailments is entirely necessary with old methods.

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advocates

that new diseases are associated with

sedentary

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a sedentary lifestyle

sedentary lifestyle

sedentary lifestyles

life-style

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. Many modern medicines are not effective and could be solely resolved by altering daily-routine rather than adding ancient herbal remedies. People

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remain

have remained

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confined

to their daily chores and unable to spare time for physical activities in order to remain healthy. A

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briefly giving the gist of something

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; obesity is one of the most contentious

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concerns

encountered with

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a sedentary lifestyle

sedentary lifestyle

sedentary lifestyles

life-style

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

313 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

holistic approach
herbal remedies
acupuncture
integrative healthcare
modern lifestyle diseases
prevention
patient outcomes
sustainable health solutions
underlying causes
scientifically validated
healthcare systems
complementary therapies
balance and well-being
stress management
dietary habits
acceptance
resonate with
comprehensive care options
formal healthcare systems
personal beliefs

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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