Many young people nowadays are imitating celebrities in sports and movies. In your opinion, is this good or bad? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.

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It is now quite common for young people to imitate the

lifestyle

of famous actors and sports personalities. In my opinion,

this

trend has both merits and demerits. Celebrities are people who have achieved name and fame in their field. They worked hard to become what they are. Obviously, there are a lot of things that young people can learn

from

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about

famous people. Perseverance is one of them. Successful

sportspersons

have put in years of hard

work

to gain international name and fame. Many of them hail from very ordinary backgrounds and yet they achieved stupendous success by virtue of their hard

work

. A young person following an eminent sports personality in all likelihood will get inspired by his idol and learn the value of hard

work

and perseverance.

This

, in turn, benefits his own life and career. Famous actors and musicians all have similar stories to tell and are an inspiration for millions. Their success story inspires young people to script their own success stories.

In addition

, youngsters following celebrities in fashion or sports are more likely to become health conscious.

For example

, teenagers admiring Bollywood celebrities often aspire to have the six pack

abs

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ABS

abuse

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that their screen idols possess.

This

encourages them to

work

out and it benefits their health. On the flip side, celebrities have their own flaws and a youngster should never try to copy their

lifestyle

blindly.

For example

, many actors are famous for their lavish

lifestyle

. They spend

enormously

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enormous

on garments,

cars and

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cars, and

other accessories. A teenager who wants these luxuries for himself will unwittingly invite trouble into his life. When he realizes that he cannot live the glam

lifestyle

he aspires

for

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, he will become disappointed. Some of them may even get involved in criminal activities to fund their lavish lifestyles. In conclusion, when teenagers get inspired by celebrities, it can have both positive and negative

impact

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impacts

on their lives. There are certainly a lot of things they can learn

from

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about

famous people.

However

, they should never try to copy their

lifestyle

blindly.

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