Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some governments are changing their policies by allowing to work after
age
60. Some argue that
this
development will provide major benefits for the societies. I  completely disagree with those people based on some facts which I will discuss in
this
essay.
Firstly
, currently there is a huge competition for employment around the world for all of the
age
categories. If governments permit older people to work,
as a result
,
majority
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the majority
of younger crowd will be left unemployed.
Although
, most youngsters lack of experience in the job perspective, they are the spirit of a nation. Another factor involves with
this
is when these youngsters left without a proper work or an income they tend to select illegal activities
such
as stealing, misleading people.
Moreover
, they may even
forced
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force
to do drugs because of
bad influence
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the bad influence
bad influences
of the their crime partners.
Secondly
, considering the economical aspect of the problem. Young people are the most energetic in a society.
Hence
, they would produce most efficient workforce of
an
to or toward the inside of
in
any country.
Working capacity
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The working capacity
of the people over
age
60 is less compared to
the young
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younger
the younger
ones.
Therefore
, it would be beneficial for
economy
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the economy
of a nation and the employers if old people forced to retire at a certain
age
.
Furthermore
, when a person
reach
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reaches
the
age
of 60
that is
their final stage of the life,
thus
they should enjoy it restfully rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
running
over
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after
the money. In a nutshell, providing employment for older people would not be
such
a good idea after all because it would reduce the employment opportunities for the young leading them to criminal activities not only that, it would affect the economy and will make the older people restless. Because of that I totally disagree with
this
statement.

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