While some suggest the best way to combat climate change is by having a carbon tax on large corporations’ activities, others think that individuals paying tax on their own carbon footprints will have a greater impact.
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In
this
day and age, people have different views on how individuals should action to reduce global warming. While
there are some good arguments in favour of the view that the government need to increase the taxes
in terms of carbon that factories
produce. I would argue that charging taxes
to people is a better option to combat climate change.
On the one hand, there is a growing belief that putting taxes
on industries
emissions could be more advantageous for several reasons. The first Change noun form
industries'
industry's
reason
is that organizations have witnessed a significant increase over the past few years, which is the main reason
for global warming due to
it
activities. Change the pronoun
its
For instance
, in Vietnam, many factories
have been reported to be
Change the verb form
release
release
a large amount of carbon dioxide, making the nearby areas less residential over the years. Another reason
is that,
the enlargement of industries requires the areas to cut down trees for its materials and to create places to construct Remove the comma
apply
factories
. This
action allows the atmosphere to enhance in temperature, which is the main reason
that makes the globe warmer.
On the other hand
, I believe that charging taxes
to individuals for their own toxic substances can help reduce climate change more significantly. Firstly
, compared to factory emissions, individuals believe that human activities can release
much more substance than the corporations' work. For example
, in America, there was a report proving that the carbon dioxide that citizens release
was two times higher compared to that in factories
. Secondly
, vehicle gas is considered to be more toxic than industry emissions. As a result
, the summarize of gas that is
released by cars or motorbikes around the world would definitely be larger than factories
.
In conclusion, although
both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that people paying for their own toxic substance
that they Fix the agreement mistake
substances
release
would be better and more helpful regarding climate change.Submitted by lahuyquan123 on
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