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In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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In most
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nations, individuals
 are worried with the growing number of children that are obsessed.In my opinion
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this
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sedentry
requiring sitting or little activity
sedentary
 lifestyles
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 There are possible remedies to deal with these problems. Increasing number of children becoming obsessed these days is caused by certain factors.
Firstly
, physical education is not incorporated into the school curriculum, so children do not know the importance of indulging in it
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Another point to consider is that technology has revolutionized what children do with their spare time.
This
 implies that rather than cycling or playing in the park
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they prefer to watch television and playing video games in their leisure period
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which involves no exercising.
Consequently
, resulting in overweight. One of the ways of solving the problem of obesity in children is by exposing them to exercise
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Parents and educational
institute s
set up or lay the groundwork for
institutes
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 to reintegrate physical fitness into their homes and school schedules, which will go a long way in reducing the growing problem of children with obesity.
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parents should monitor their offsprings on their use of gadgets
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but rather teach them the importance outdoor activities and the need to involve in
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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