some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that the major problem associated with the ecosystem is the disappearance of specific types of flora and fauna,

whereas

certain others think that there are other significant issues related to the

environment

.

Although

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some species of animals and plants

had

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vanished

within

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the

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time which creates

problems

in

life

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cycle

, there are other significantly important

problems

which may be dangerous for the

life

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lives

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of human beings. On the one side,

disappearance

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the disappearance

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of particular types of flora and fauna

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disturbed the natural

life

cycle

. By

this

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I mean to say that when some species

became

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completely lost, there are chances of

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in

population

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the population

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of their

preys

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.

This

might be not good for other small animals and

by

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this

way, the whole

cycle

will be disturbed.

For example

, the extinction of tigers in major

part

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of the world has become crucial and

damage

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the natural

life

cycle

around

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10%,

according

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a survey conducted by WHO. In my opinion,

this

problem is not significant because it does not impact

consequently

on the

environment

and there are very effective ways to preserve those animals and plants. On the other side,

life threatening

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problems

such

as global warming

has

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significant

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impact on the

environment

.

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is to say that

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amount

Co2

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of Co2

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emission

have

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raised

up

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a

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temperature level in the

environment

which

melts

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south

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and north pole’s ice caps and

ice bergs

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.

As a result

, the sea level is continuously rising

up

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which leads to

drowning

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of many islands. A good reference for

this

is that

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Japan is sinking down 1% per year,

according to

researchers at Stanford University. I believe that these

problems

have a major effect on the future of human beings so these

problems

should be taken seriously. In conclusion, though, the extinction of some types of flora and fauna has an impact on the natural

life

cycle

of food, other major issues

such

as global warming ought to be taken seriously because the future of human beings

are

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on the line.