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Nowadays newspapers publish information about the private lives of individuals. Some people think the government should maintain certain control over the information that gets published, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally. Regarding the notion, whether government should supervise over the news, which break the rules and publish information about individuals, private life or newspaper should get freedom to publish anything they want.
However
, different people have their distinct mindset. In my opinion, The authority has to control these publishers because it is against the freedom to live. To commence with the
first
 notion, there are myriad things to share in its favour. The newspapers are crossing the limits in order to increase the sales.
Although
 there are many issues, which are severe, in society, they publish about personal life. In order to control these media, authority must take an action on illegal printers. If bureaucrats take a reaction on
this
, the media will stop to print articles. To illustrate, In 2010, Ettifaq, which is the famous newspaper in Bangladesh printed an article about Siam Ahmed, who is the famous star, marriage. At that time the government took a reaction against the publisher.
Hence
 the newspapers didn't try to publish
such
 things. Shifting towards the
second
 school of thought, the government has no need to react to these things because celebrities have a lot of responsibilities of society so that they should be in a polite manner. News articles are being published, but Celebies need to maintain calm. When stars stay in a polite manner, media
also
 will write in a same kind. For an example, Sakil Khan, who is a famous actor, had cheated many girls with using his stardom. At that time, the media focused in a good way.
Hence
 he was arrested. Every one has to do their work ten societies will success. To conclude, I believe that If authority take an action on newspapers which are printing celebrities personal matters severely, the media don't publish these things.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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