International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages ?

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industry has gro
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The tourist industry
wn over the years
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contributing
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job
provision. On the one hand ,touris
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provides jobs to local individual, services
such
as
tourist
guide , hotel
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taffs at
tourist
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ners who serve tourists at the hotel .These
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instance, I
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later, he got a
job
as a
tourist
guide in the UK and has since been stable and able to cater for himself and family. Other advantages include economic growth via generation of internal Revenue as
tourist
pay for their trips. These advantages enable travel agencies to be less strict with their policies .
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On other ha
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the other hand
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the loss
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an inability to resist the gratification of whims and desires
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pick up vices
such
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ices, indecent dressing from
tourist
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who works as a
tourist
centre got acquainted with a
tourist
, he usually goes to spend time at night discussing over 4-5 bottles of alcohol .
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haviour gradually becomes a habit and he is unknowingly addicted. Generation of waste at
tourist
centre is another disadvantage, these waste deface the
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long run, these
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countries, especially
rism has gotten cheaper due to its various benefits which the country benefits from,
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the act of going from one place to another
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  • public transportation
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