You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news with your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● explain where the money came from ● say what you intend to do with the money ● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.

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Dear Jay, I'm fine, and I hope you are doing good too. I feel delighted to share a piece of good news that I won a prize bond, which I had bought a few months ago. As you know, I had purchased some prize bond from my pocket money.

Although

I was not sure at the time of purchase, I will really win it. But, when I received a call from a bank representative that I had won the prize of amount one million dollars, my joy knew no bounds, and I thanked God for His mercy upon me. What is more important, because it is a huge amount, it should be spent wisely. So I’m planning that I'll divide

this

money into chunks, and donate a handsome amount for charity to an organization which is located. I'll

also

pay my university fees for the remaining semesters. I’d like to invite you

this

weekend to be a part of my happiness. I’m planning to throw a party at a five-star restaurant to celebrate

this

great news. If you are not available

this

weekend, I will shift

this

event to the

date for your convenience. Let me know about your plans at the earliest. Best regard, Saira Bano

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

208 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news with your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● explain where the money came from ● say what you intend to do with the money ● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.

The Closing

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case

Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reason and examples.

The internet has made traditional libraries unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss giving examples from your own knowledge andexperience.