all cars that burn fussel fuels should be banned and eletronic car should be replaced them

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Due to
increasing number
Suggestion
an increasing number
of private
vechile
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicle
air
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
in
environment
Suggestion
the environment
is increasing day by day because fossil
fule
a substance that can be consumed to produce energy
fuel
emit
Suggestion
emissions
emission
by these vehicles damaging the environment badly
.
Accept space
.
some
Suggestion
Some
people assert that
electoric
using or providing or producing or transmitting or operated by electricity
electric
car should replace them. I agree with
this
statement and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will explicate it in
upcoming paragraph
Suggestion
the upcoming paragraph
with reason in upcoming paragraph

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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