Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do u agree or disagree.

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most countries have their differences in terms of culture and traditions, it has been proven that sporting events has become a universal exercise that has really helped in reducing violence among different Nations. I completely agree that international sporting e

vents especially

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events, especially

football has been r

educing

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reduced

fears among various countries because of its ability to Unite nations and reduce tensions. At

first

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, sport has been helpful in bringing unity among nations and reducing violence. Every 4 y

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years, for

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32 countries come together to enjoy soccer game.

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togetherness and unity of purpose build bonding and understanding among them.

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herefore ultimately

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reducing fears among one another.

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very nation n

ow engage

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now engages

in international friendly matches to strengthen their bilateral relationships.

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ltimately reduce

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ultimately reduces

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ension

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the tension

between the Citizens of both c

ountries even

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countries, even

in the midst of fear. To illustrate, about 4 years back the issue of xenophobia emerged in South Africa

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that South Africans are killing Nigerians and other foreign nationals in their country. A friendly match was organised between both countries to be played home and away.

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event

subsequently

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reduced

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tension of xenophobia and they now live in harmony.

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port was able to magically eradicate i

ssue

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the issue

of fear of foreigners in a safe way. In conclusion sporting events

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as football has been increasing love for one another among different nations. I absolutely agree that

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sporting exercise has been helpful in reducing any form of phobia g

lobally.

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global

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foster global unity
diplomatic tools
friendly competition
national pride
peaceful context
media coverage
international image
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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do u agree or disagree.

Your opinion

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