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Both the rich and the poor find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
It is often argued that it has become quite difficult for students to get
admission
 in a tertiary level institutes irrespective
for
Suggestion
of
 their financial
status
. In my opinion, I completely agree that getting into a college has become tougher for all students as
admission
 now depend more on academic
status
 and rising competition due to limited seats. University
admission
 is considered as
important step
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an important step
 for a successful career. As
such
, Majorities of colleges has formed a definite criteria for giving
admission
 to
student
 and good academic track record has become important necessity.
For example
, in India
getting
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gets
is getting
 into universities require a
student
 to achieve a definitive percentage of marks
in particular
 subjects in secondary school examination. The
student
 who
achieve
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achieves
this
 percentage get
admission irrespective
Accept comma addition
admission, irrespective
 of their financial
status
 Along with academics, the
second
 most important factor for
this
 change in
admission
 strategy is an increasing competition among
student
 due to
limited number
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a limited number
 of seats in each university. Each university has a definite number of seats in each course and has to conduct
entrance exam
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an entrance exam
entrance exams
 for giving
admission
 to students. Those students who cleared these exams get
admission
 without considering their financial
status
.
For example
, for
admission
 into 10000 seats of IIT about 1000000 students gives entrance exam and those who cleared whether belonging to rich or poor family get
admission
. In conclusion, I agree with the view that both strong affluent and poor face equal amount of difficulty in accessing colleges as more universities now focus on academic performance of
student
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students
the student
a student
 and have restricted intake due to
limited number
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a limited number
 of seats.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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