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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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For each individual health plays a major role to lead a happy
life
 in coming years and to live long. Some people say healthiness is likely to be lower over coming years where others oppose it.
This
 essay will discuss both the statements and an opinion. The standard living
life
 of the current generation has changed completely when compared with older's. People
fell
mat together and make felt-like
felt
 more and more sick because of the food habits, pollution and by developing laziness. Food habits have been completely changed, older generation relayed eating healthy food which was rich in nutrients and proteins that were made at home. Current society, citizens are occupied at their work,
therefore
 not having time to cook for themselves and
thus
 ending up ordering food online.
Thus by
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Thus, by
 consuming these outside foods regularly people develop obesity. The
second
 disadvantage that may not lead to have a healthy
life
 is laziness. Even though they get free time, people often spend to do their leisure activities like watching movies and playing video games over the phone. Lack of sport activities will
also
 lead to
a
Suggestion
an
 unhealthy
life
. Example: among 100 people, we only see 20 people who prefer a walk to their work. On the other side, every individual is developing interests in maintaining a good health by hitting the gym nearby to their areas. They are many gyms which attract people by offering great deals for a longer course,
however citizens
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however, citizens
 should develop an interest in maintaining their own health to lead a healthy
life
 in the future. To sum up, it is an individual perspective to lead a healthy
life
 or an unhealthy
life
. One has to develop inside their heads to lead to great and happy
life
 ahead.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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