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Scientists believe that finding other life forms in space by sending massages is a good idea while others think it can be dangerous.

It is a controversial issue as to whether finding aliens in different spaces by sending text would bring a positive response, or, whether those different forms of creatures would provide calamities in the
world
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. From my perspective, in
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 modern era of continual development of science and technology, it is just to invite the outer
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's lives who could help human beings in many ways rather than destroying us.
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 with, researchers think that it can be dangerous to send messages in the
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 due to the alien's unexpected rude attitude. Despite that, they are continually sending hints to
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such
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 as Mars, Saturn, and the moon, believing that they would get a response one day.
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, in 1969, Neil Armstrong went to the moon in search of any life forms, though he was unable to find. Since
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, many developed countries have tried incessantly, they neither think those aliens could destroy the
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, nor expect those life forms' attitude towards human beings. Considering that if they had found
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 deformed creatures, it would save people on the earth.
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, scientists undoubtedly believe that aliens are stronger, intelligent creature than human beings. These days, people are suffering from natural calamities, diseases, pollution, and global warming. As the characters of aliens are powerful,
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 nature could help to reduce all these calamities of the
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.
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, the outer
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, animals,
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, might provide a better environment for us to live in
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 earth.
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 is because they have super power and talent to implement any tasks in a facile manner.
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, if scientists deliver any sign to aliens if would take to them as a positive response. In conclusion, the authority of
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 inventor reckons that providing hints to the outer
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 may prove a disaster, as we are unknown to them, while a group of other researchers think opposite like saving humanity, decreasing natural catastrophe, and pollutants from ambience, curing fatal, diseases, et Cetra. For that reason, in my opinion
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the aliens would bring positive signs
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 of negative remarks.

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