More and more people are buying ready to eat foods instead of cooking themselves. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In busy lifestyle, men and women do not get
time
to
cook
at
home
instead
they prefer ready to eat
food
packets.
Home
c
ook
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cooked
food
is best for health
.
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.
I believe it is unhealthy to eat outside everyday to save a
time
. There a
re
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is
more downside f
or
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to
this
development than positive effects.My arguments are ensuring in
further
paragraphs. N
ow a days,
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Nowadays
most of the persons at
home
doing a job to live a better
life
. It is
also
important to
use
your knowledge after completing a study.
Furthermore
, it h
elp
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helps
has helped
to live an independent
life
. For
this
reason, people spend 9 to 11 hours outside
h
ome.
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the home
M
oreover they
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Moreover, they
do not get
time
to make their tiffin or
cook
at
home
in f
ast paced
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a fast paced life
life
. So
,
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,
they take ready to eat packets
.
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.
But it is not good as a regular basis.
Although
they maintain standard qualities f
or
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of
f
ood but
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food, but
it is not easy to trust o
n
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in
with
everything.
For example
, no one knows which type of oil, vegetables and other spices used for cooking
.
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.
Infect, c
alaries
unit of heat defined as the quantity of heat required to raise the temperature of 1 gram of water by 1 degree centigrade at atmospheric pressure
calories
and fats are more u
tilize
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utilized
in outside
food
. F
uthermore,
in addition
Furthermore
it saves money if you make
food
at
home
.
For instance
, m
enda
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the media
media
is very common ingredient to
use
in ready to
food
p
acket which
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packet, which
is very harmful effect at l
ong period
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a long period time
time
. In order to
use
high quality products, people do not get all nutritions from one item. There are multiple options available in m
arket
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the market
for
food
products but they do not provide every necessary nutritions. Above all, if people
cook
at
home
, they can
use
pure
,
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,
fresh product and enjoy tasty
food
according to choice and mood.
For example
,
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,
there are limited varieties available in ready to eat
food
and compromise with t
est
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the test
.
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.
Sometimes we do not have other options.
In contrast
, at
home
food
, you have no limitations to make any
food
. Sometimes after a t
iredsome
so lacking in interest as to cause mental weariness
tiresome
day
,
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,
we can order
food
from outside once in a fifteen days to take r
est
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a rest
from cooking.Apart from
this
, everyday outside
food
is d
eterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
for our health on a long term period. In conclusion, we should
cook
at
home
to live healthy and happy
life
. Though it is l
ittle tough
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a little tough
to get a
time
from r
outine schedule but
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the routine schedule, but
the routine schedule but
it will benevolent and easy after getting used t
o eat.
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to eating
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