Some people argue that we should do research into our family history. Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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On
this
day, while people conduct research into their family background, others pay attention to the present and
future
generations.In my opinion, we can find a middle ground where all theses opinions are satisfied. On the one hand, a huge number of people look into their family
history
for various reasons.
First
, learning about the family tree helps people satisfy curiosity because
media
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the media
makes
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make
they
objective case of they
them
believe that it is necessary and natural to understand about family
history
.
For instance
, the United State is a
mutiracial
made up of or involving or acting on behalf of various races
multiracial
society
,
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,
so many Americans are interested in learning about their origins.
This
leads to a development of a sense of identity.
Second
, looking into the family background will help the children learn from the life of their ancestors, including what to do to avoid the previous mistakes.
As a result
, people can
instiil
impart gradually
instill
install
family pride or keep ancestor’s memories alive.
On the other hand
, people put more emphasis on the
future
and
presents
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present
generations
instead
of looking into the past. The reason is our past does not always define who we are as well as our ancestor’s past
achivements
the action of accomplishing something
achievements
achievement
do not ensure our
future
successs
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
, so investigating in family background is a waste of time and money if we are curious.
Moreover
, our actions and attitudes now will already affect our present and
future
. Our laziness at
present time
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the present time
,
for example
,
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,
will badly affect our finance and happiness later on. Because of
this
reason, concentrating on present and
future
is greater important than seeking information about the family
history
. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
while I admit research into the family
history
is necessary in the civilized society, I
also
do
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that, people should pay attention on the present and
future
generations.
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