Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The topic environmental problems have been controversial these days. Some people argued that the pressing issue in our environment is that of loss of particular species of plants and
animals, while,
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animals, while
others say that there are other main problems aside the aforementioned.
This
essay will give
further
details on both argument and
my opinion stated
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stated my opinion
as well.
Lossing
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Losing
a particular type of farm produce and animals (both domestic and wild animals) have been a big problem
to
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in
some western countries. Because, extinction of green leaf
vegetables limits
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vegetables, limits
the varieties of the food which people derive nutrients from.
Also
, some animals,
such
as, dinosaur are reported to have gone into
extinct
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extinction
, and,
this
have affected
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has affected
the
economical
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economic
growth of most countries. These animals served as an entrance fee,
therefore
, adding to the growth of the country's economy.
On the contrary
, other people believe that apart from the loss of crops and wildlife reserves, there are greater environmental issues facing us. The research conducted by environmental
pollution
agencies of
nigeria
a republic in West Africa on the Gulf of Guinea; gained independence from Britain in 1960; most populous African country
Nigeria
(EPAN) agreed that
pollution
of all kinds,
such
as, air
pollution
, land
pollution
, water
pollution
contributes to almost 90 percent of the country's setbacks. These setbacks have resulted in the death of some sea animals like the kills and
blues
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blue
whales. In conclusion, the problems in today's world
consists
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consist
of loss of plants and animals, and
pollution
of all kinds, which, the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
contributes more to the
fall
an intuitive awareness
feel
of a country. If the government of all countries can focus on finding solutions to all of these problems in the near future, I believe the world would be a better place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat
  • extinction
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable
  • conservation
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