The graph below gives information about the number of Catholics residing in different nations, during 2010-2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar charts enumerate the
number
of Catholics
who live in different nations in 2010 and 2013. The States taken into account are: China
, India
, Philippines, Vietnam, Korea and Japan.
According to
the graph, amongst the 6 countries
three of them had a raise of numbers in 2013 compared to 2010: China
, India
and Japan. For the other 3 countries
the number
of Catholics
is lower in 2013 than in 2010.
On one hand, the country with the highest number
of Catholics
is Philippines by far. The specific nation in 2010 had over 75 million
of Catholic believers and in 2013 72 million
. On the other hand
Japan is the country with the lowest number
: 400,000 in 2010 and 509,000 in 2013.
Regarding the other four countries
, China
and India
in 2010 had more or less the same number
of Catholics
, between 9 and 10 million
. Although
in 2013 the difference is bigger, India
had 19 million
and China
15 million
. The situation is similar for Vietnam and Korea, in 2010 both countries
had around 5 million
of believers, while
in 2013 Vietnam remained roughly with the same number
. On the contrary
Korea lost around 4 million
of Catholics
in 2013.
Some companies
sponsor
sports
as a way to advertise themselves. Some people
think it is good, while
others think there are disadvantages to this
.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
I strongly believe that for a company
to sponsor
specific sports
in order to advertise themselves is definitely a good move. Some of the most famous advertising campaign are linked to sports
. In addition
, some companies
have based their entire success on relating themselves to certain sports
e.g. the energy drink Redbull sponsored all kind of extreme sports
.
Some people
might think for some reasons that a company
should avoid sponsoring sports
. Maybe it is because some think that certain companies
should remain an elite and linking themselves to sports
mean to tarnish their images. Even more, some people
might believe that it could turn into a bad investment since companies
need to take big financial risks with huge investments to sponsor
certain sports
. Therefore
, according to
some it is better not to sponsor
a sport
at all.
In my personal view, companies
should sponsor
sports
if they have the possibility to do so. It is not important whether the company
produces sportswear e.g. Rolex with the most famous tennis player Roger Federer or the company
AON with the football team Manchester United. Every fan of the specific sport
makes the immediate link with a sport
player or a team and a brand. By sponsoring a sport
, companies
have the possibility to show their brand to millions of people
worldwide and often this
tactic has a huge return in sales.
To conclude
, I strongly disagree with those who are contrary to the idea of companies
sponsor
a sport
. Millions of people
watch different sports
every single day and unconsciously a lot of them are hooked by some sponsors even if they do not realize it immediately. People
love sports
and they will keep watching them, therefore
it is a great way for a company
sponsor
a sport
to advertise itself.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, therefore, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, catholics, china, india, countries, million, companies, sponsor, sports, people, company, sport with synonyms.
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