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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Due to the increased number of
internet
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 connected devices, people have gained
access
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 to more
information
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 than they ever did.
This
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 can provide unlimited sources of anything all time, but people should
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 be aware of the drawbacks by having
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an excess amount
 of
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. Undoubtedly, having the
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 to
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 different sources, which can educate and inform people, is one of the most positive effects of the
internet
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. People can look up Wikipedia for French Revolution without reading history books and essays.
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,
this
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 search can happen without visiting a library or an expert. Not limited to time and space, an instant
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 to
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 by
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 can certainly speed up
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the learning process
.
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, there is one critical issue that needs to be addressed when using
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the internet
 to get
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; the
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 cannot always guarantee its validity. Like a double-edged sword, as much as
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the internet
 has a vast amount of
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, it
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 contains false claims as well.
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, one of the
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 user raised an allegation about a certain individual. Many users within an online community followed up with that piece of
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 and concluded solely based on that
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 claim.
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 claim, later deemed untrue, is a good example of how
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 accessed through
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the internet
 can be an unreliable yet, is powerful enough to influence other people. In conclusion, obtaining
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 through
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the internet
 is fast
and convenient but,
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and convenient, but
 considering the authenticity of
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 can be compromised in some cases, having full
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 to
information
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 by
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 cannot always lead to better use of it.So people should always be aware of the risk of accessing wrong
information
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.
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