Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Primary prevention of chronic

diseasess

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

diseases

disease

is an important goal

nowdays

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

among many

health

care

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

. According to some physicians, increasing the availability of sport

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

is the most important method to improve public

health

,

becase

for the reason that; on account of

because

it will lead to increased physical activity. Others, including myself, think that sporting

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

centre

Centers

will have a minor effect on public

health

, and that other measures,

such

as educational programs to promote balanced diet is needed.

Increaseing

Suggestion

Increasing

the number of

publically

in a manner accessible to or observable by the public; openly

publicly

accesible

capable of being reached

accessible

sport

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

will have an effect on the

amount

of physical

activies

any specific behavior

activities

people perform regularly. By providing sport

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

which are located nearby residential areas, and are free of charge, many people engage in daily physical

acitivites

any specific behavior

activities

. As a consequence, chronic illness

such

as high blood pressure and diabetes can be prevented. According to the Israeli

health

office, in the

last

decade the average citizen increased the daily

amount

of

pysical

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

acitivity

any specific behavior

activity

by 20% and the rate of diabetes has

resided

pull back or move away or backward

receded

by 5%.

In contrast

to the above

mentioned I

Accept comma addition

mentioned, I

, and many other physicians, believe that

incraesing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

the

amount

of sporting facilities will have a minor effect on the public

health

, and that educational programs to

promot

contribute to the progress or growth of

promote

balanced

lifstyle

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

is substantially more important. Teaching our children about the importance of a balanced diet and the horrific consequences of smoking and consuming alcohol, can help our children

in

Suggestion

with

eating and living better and healthier. By doing so, we can prevent major

illnessess

impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism

illnesses

illness

such

as diabetes and obesity. To illustrate,

health

education has decreased the

amount

of

obseity

more than average fatness

obesity

among the Israeli

pediatric

of or relating to the medical care of children

paediatric

population by 10%. In conclusion,

Although

increasing the

amount

of sporting

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

will

promot

contribute to the progress or growth of

promote

promotes

physical

activites

any specific behavior

activities

activists

, other solutions

such

as educational programs to promote healthier

lifstyle

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

can assist more.