The only way to solve increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

Increased incidence of crimes

commited

bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude

committed

by young children is a growing concern

nowadys

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

. Many people believe that primary prevention, by improving parental teaching abilities, is the most important method in decreasing these crimes.

Although

I agree it is an important issue, the effect our

sociaty

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

has on the

childs

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child's

children

children's

child

maturation and

desicion

the act of making up your mind about something

decision

making is as important and should not be neglected.

Parental

Suggestion

Parenting

skills

is

Suggestion

are

important in the development of the child's character. By proper parental teaching and directions, the boy learns about moral borders and ethics, what is right and wrong and how to react properly to a social interaction.

As a

result he

Accept comma addition

result, he

recievs

get something; come into possession of

receives

skills which

allows

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allow

him to integrate into our community, and

decreas

decrease in size, extent, or range

decrease

decreased

decreases

substantially the rate of him

becomming

according with custom or propriety

becoming

and offender. The importance of these skills was seen in an educational program performed among released offenders in Israel. By teaching them about proper parental education, the rates of crimes committed by their siblings

was

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were

10% less in comparison to other inmate's children. Despite the major effect parents have on their children, I believe our society has a much stronger impact on our

childrens

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children's

children

character. Our kids absorb the environment, and learn how to react to social interactions based on it. As a consequence, boys who are exposed to violent and illegal acts will have a higher chance of

behaiving

behave in a certain manner; show a certain behavior; conduct or comport oneself

behaving

similarly

. To illustrate, a research

perofomed

carry out or perform an action

performed

by the Harvard University, reported that the rates of crimes committed by children

is

Suggestion

are

10% higher among boys who were exposed to violent acts in their residential area, regardless of the

parents

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parent

parents'

education. To conclude,

although

parental skills are important in decreasing the rate of crimes, I believe social factors play a stronger role.