The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The World Wide Web, more commonly known as
internet
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the internet
, usage has increased many folds since its launch for
public
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the public
in the late 19th century.
Web
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The web
has become the fastest and the easiest way of accessing
information
. One can read about recent published medical journals, from the comfort of their houses, at the click of a few buttons. Many people wonder if important or relevant
information
gets lost in
big pile
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a big pile
the big pile
big piles
of irrelevant data. Let explore
this
more in my essay. Technology has helped people find meaning full
information
easily and accurately without losing precious time. Earlier in days, trip to
library
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the library
was
more common way
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the most common way
most common way
of doing
research but
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research, but
not
this
all can be accomplished from the comforts of one’s home.
Furthermore
,
this
time saved can later be utilized for segregation or analysis of the data captured.
Hence
,
internet
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the internet
has not only capturing
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was not only captured
the data less
cumbersome but
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cumbersome, but
also
have
huge amount
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a huge amount
of time that can be put to better use.
However
, with benefits come vices and the internet are not at all free of them. As we all are aware, not everything
that is
available on the web is true, people need to be aware of
this
.
Secondly
, it
also
comes at a cost since not all
information
is available free. Most importantly, the
information
that is
otherwise
difficult to access can
also
be utilized by terrorist to plot against the harming the people
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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