Many things used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines .do this bring more advantages or disadvantages ?
AFTER COMING OF THE NEWER TECHNOLOGIES, MANY HOUSEHOLD CHORES ARE BEING PERFORMED BY ELECTRONIC DEVICES RATHER THAN MANUALLY. WHAT I THINK IS THAT
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INOVATION BRINGS BOTH MYRID OF PROS AND CONS. Linking Words
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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW Linking Words
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REVOLUTION IS GIVING BENEFITS AND LOSS.
TO START WITH ADVANTAGES, THE PRIME BENEFIT OF THE Linking Words
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IS THAT IT HAS REDUCED MANUALLY WORK LOAD AND Use synonyms
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. TO ELABORATE, MACHINES CAN DO 100 PEOPLE WORK ALONE AT A Use synonyms
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. FOR AN INSTANCE, IN THE PAST, PEOPLE HANDLED ACCOUNT MANUALLY WHICH WAS Use synonyms
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CONSUMING AND NEEDED ATLEAST 2 PEOPLE FOR ACCURATE COUNTING, BUT NOW Use synonyms
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COMPUTER ALONE CAN DO THAT IN SHORT PERIOD OF Use synonyms
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WE JUST NEED TO ENTER THE DATE IN THE COMPUTER Use synonyms
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, PEOPLE HAVE MORE Linking Words
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FOR OTHER WORKS LIKE, COOKING, SPENDING MORE Use synonyms
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WITH FAMILY ETC. TO EXPAND IT IN DETAILS, BEFORE WOMEN HAD TO STAY AT Use synonyms
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PLACE AND FOCUS ON Use synonyms
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TASK BUT IN Use synonyms
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OPERATED WORLD WHERE WE JUST NEED TO SET THE CRITERIA AS PER OUR CONVIENCE. FOR AN EXAMPLE, TO WASH CLOTHS IN WASHING Use synonyms
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, HUMAN NEED TO POUR THE CLOTH WITH WASHING POWDER OR LIQUID AND JUST SET THE Use synonyms
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WITH WASHING AND DRYING Use synonyms
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AND PRESS THE START BUTTON, MEAN WHILE THEY CAN COOK OR LOOK AFTER CHILDREN ETC. Use synonyms
HOWEVER
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MACHINES DEMAND MORE MAINTANCE WHICH IS HIGHLY EXPENSIVE FOR MIDDLE CLASS PEOPLE TO AFFORD IT.
IN THE TERMS OF DEMERITS, Linking Words
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TOO HAVE ENORMOUS DRAWBACKS, Linking Words
FIRSTLY
, DUE TO TECHNOLOGY, INDIVIDUALS ARE HAVING MORE SERIOUS PROBLEM WHICH WILL START WITH THE MINOR AND END UP IN TO THE MAJOR PROBLEM Linking Words
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AS OBESITY. TO EXPLAIN IT, PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE LASY AS MACHINES ARE AVILABLE TO DO THEIR WORK SO THE Linking Words
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IS SPENID MORE Use synonyms
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BY SITTING AND EATING ON THE Use synonyms
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PLACE RATHER ENGAGING IN TO SOME OTHER WORK WHICH REQUIRE PHYSICAL WORK LIKE SPORTS OUTDOOR ACTIVITIES ETC. FOR AN EXAMPLE, WATCHING TV OR PLAYING GAME RATHER GO OUTSIDE AND PLAY OR DO SOME USEFUL THINGS WHILE MACHINES ARE DOING THEIR WORKUse synonyms
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LEADS TO OBESITY AND DUE TO OBESITY PEOPLE MAY HAVE SOME HEART PROBLEMS. Linking Words
SECONDLY
, FROM THE GOVERNMENT POINT OF VIES Linking Words
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REVOLUTION WORKS ESPECIALLY ON ELECTRICITY OR SOME KIND OF FUELS LIKE DISEIL, PETROLLinking Words
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INCREASES MORE CONSUMPTION Linking Words
INSTEAD
OF PRODUCTION. Linking Words
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GOVERNMENT HAS TO PAY OR WORK MORE ON TO RISE MORE ELECTRIC POWER AND THAT TOO EXPENSIVE FOR THEM.
TO CONCLUDE, UNDOUBTABLY MAN MADE WORKS ARE NOW REPLACED WITH THE Linking Words
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WORKS. BUT NO Use synonyms
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SHOULD US NEGLATE THE DISADVANTAGES. SO USE IT WISELY WHEN NEEDED.Use synonyms
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