Many things used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines .do this bring more advantages or disadvantages ?
AFTER COMING OF THE NEWER TECHNOLOGIES, MANY HOUSEHOLD CHORES ARE BEING PERFORMED BY ELECTRONIC DEVICES RATHER THAN MANUALLY. WHAT I THINK IS THAT
THIS
INOVATION BRINGS BOTH MYRID OF PROS AND CONS. THIS
ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW THIS
REVOLUTION IS GIVING BENEFITS AND LOSS.
TO START WITH ADVANTAGES, THE PRIME BENEFIT OF THE MACHINE
IS THAT IT HAS REDUCED MANUALLY WORK LOAD AND TIME
. TO ELABORATE, MACHINES CAN DO 100 PEOPLE WORK ALONE AT A TIME
. FOR AN INSTANCE, IN THE PAST, PEOPLE HANDLED ACCOUNT MANUALLY WHICH WAS TIME
CONSUMING AND NEEDED ATLEAST 2 PEOPLE FOR ACCURATE COUNTING, BUT NOW ONE
COMPUTER ALONE CAN DO THAT IN SHORT PERIOD OF TIME
WE JUST NEED TO ENTER THE DATE IN THE COMPUTER THAT IS
ALL. IN ADDITION
TO THIS
, PEOPLE HAVE MORE TIME
FOR OTHER WORKS LIKE, COOKING, SPENDING MORE TIME
WITH FAMILY ETC. TO EXPAND IT IN DETAILS, BEFORE WOMEN HAD TO STAY AT ONE
PLACE AND FOCUS ON ONE
TASK BUT IN THIS
MACHINE
OPERATED WORLD WHERE WE JUST NEED TO SET THE CRITERIA AS PER OUR CONVIENCE. FOR AN EXAMPLE, TO WASH CLOTHS IN WASHING MACHINE
, HUMAN NEED TO POUR THE CLOTH WITH WASHING POWDER OR LIQUID AND JUST SET THE TIME
WITH WASHING AND DRYING TIME
AND PRESS THE START BUTTON, MEAN WHILE THEY CAN COOK OR LOOK AFTER CHILDREN ETC. HOWEVER
, THIS
MACHINES DEMAND MORE MAINTANCE WHICH IS HIGHLY EXPENSIVE FOR MIDDLE CLASS PEOPLE TO AFFORD IT.
IN THE TERMS OF DEMERITS, THIS
TOO HAVE ENORMOUS DRAWBACKS, FIRSTLY
, DUE TO TECHNOLOGY, INDIVIDUALS ARE HAVING MORE SERIOUS PROBLEM WHICH WILL START WITH THE MINOR AND END UP IN TO THE MAJOR PROBLEM SUCH
AS OBESITY. TO EXPLAIN IT, PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE LASY AS MACHINES ARE AVILABLE TO DO THEIR WORK SO THE ONE
IS SPENID MORE TIME
BY SITTING AND EATING ON THE ONE
PLACE RATHER ENGAGING IN TO SOME OTHER WORK WHICH REQUIRE PHYSICAL WORK LIKE SPORTS OUTDOOR ACTIVITIES ETC. FOR AN EXAMPLE, WATCHING TV OR PLAYING GAME RATHER GO OUTSIDE AND PLAY OR DO SOME USEFUL THINGS WHILE MACHINES ARE DOING THEIR WORK .
Accept space
.
THIS
LEADS TO OBESITY AND DUE TO OBESITY PEOPLE MAY HAVE SOME HEART PROBLEMS. SECONDLY
, FROM THE GOVERNMENT POINT OF VIES THIS
REVOLUTION WORKS ESPECIALLY ON ELECTRICITY OR SOME KIND OF FUELS LIKE DISEIL, PETROL .
Accept space
.
THIS
INCREASES MORE CONSUMPTION INSTEAD
OF PRODUCTION. THUS
GOVERNMENT HAS TO PAY OR WORK MORE ON TO RISE MORE ELECTRIC POWER AND THAT TOO EXPENSIVE FOR THEM.
TO CONCLUDE, UNDOUBTABLY MAN MADE WORKS ARE NOW REPLACED WITH THE MACHINE
WORKS. BUT NO ONE
SHOULD US NEGLATE THE DISADVANTAGES. SO USE IT WISELY WHEN NEEDED.Submitted by drsefalipatel on
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