Many things used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines .do this bring more advantages or disadvantages ?

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AFTER COMING OF THE NEWER TECHNOLOGIES, MANY HOUSEHOLD CHORES ARE BEING PERFORMED BY ELECTRONIC DEVICES RATHER THAN MANUALLY. WHAT I THINK IS THAT
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INOVATION BRINGS BOTH MYRID OF PROS AND CONS.
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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW
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REVOLUTION IS GIVING BENEFITS AND LOSS. TO START WITH ADVANTAGES, THE PRIME BENEFIT OF THE
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IS THAT IT HAS REDUCED MANUALLY WORK LOAD AND
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. TO ELABORATE, MACHINES CAN DO 100 PEOPLE WORK ALONE AT A
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. FOR AN INSTANCE, IN THE PAST, PEOPLE HANDLED ACCOUNT MANUALLY WHICH WAS
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CONSUMING AND NEEDED ATLEAST 2 PEOPLE FOR ACCURATE COUNTING, BUT NOW
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COMPUTER ALONE CAN DO THAT IN SHORT PERIOD OF
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WE JUST NEED TO ENTER THE DATE IN THE COMPUTER
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ALL.
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, PEOPLE HAVE MORE
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FOR OTHER WORKS LIKE, COOKING, SPENDING MORE
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WITH FAMILY ETC. TO EXPAND IT IN DETAILS, BEFORE WOMEN HAD TO STAY AT
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PLACE AND FOCUS ON
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TASK BUT IN
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MACHINE
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OPERATED WORLD WHERE WE JUST NEED TO SET THE CRITERIA AS PER OUR CONVIENCE. FOR AN EXAMPLE, TO WASH CLOTHS IN WASHING
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, HUMAN NEED TO POUR THE CLOTH WITH WASHING POWDER OR LIQUID AND JUST SET THE
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WITH WASHING AND DRYING
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AND PRESS THE START BUTTON, MEAN WHILE THEY CAN COOK OR LOOK AFTER CHILDREN ETC.
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MACHINES DEMAND MORE MAINTANCE WHICH IS HIGHLY EXPENSIVE FOR MIDDLE CLASS PEOPLE TO AFFORD IT. IN THE TERMS OF DEMERITS,
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TOO HAVE ENORMOUS DRAWBACKS,
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, DUE TO TECHNOLOGY, INDIVIDUALS ARE HAVING MORE SERIOUS PROBLEM WHICH WILL START WITH THE MINOR AND END UP IN TO THE MAJOR PROBLEM
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AS OBESITY. TO EXPLAIN IT, PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE LASY AS MACHINES ARE AVILABLE TO DO THEIR WORK SO THE
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IS SPENID MORE
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BY SITTING AND EATING ON THE
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PLACE RATHER ENGAGING IN TO SOME OTHER WORK WHICH REQUIRE PHYSICAL WORK LIKE SPORTS OUTDOOR ACTIVITIES ETC. FOR AN EXAMPLE, WATCHING TV OR PLAYING GAME RATHER GO OUTSIDE AND PLAY OR DO SOME USEFUL THINGS WHILE MACHINES ARE DOING THEIR WORK
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LEADS TO OBESITY AND DUE TO OBESITY PEOPLE MAY HAVE SOME HEART PROBLEMS.
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, FROM THE GOVERNMENT POINT OF VIES
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REVOLUTION WORKS ESPECIALLY ON ELECTRICITY OR SOME KIND OF FUELS LIKE DISEIL, PETROL
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INCREASES MORE CONSUMPTION
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OF PRODUCTION.
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GOVERNMENT HAS TO PAY OR WORK MORE ON TO RISE MORE ELECTRIC POWER AND THAT TOO EXPENSIVE FOR THEM. TO CONCLUDE, UNDOUBTABLY MAN MADE WORKS ARE NOW REPLACED WITH THE
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WORKS. BUT NO
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SHOULD US NEGLATE THE DISADVANTAGES. SO USE IT WISELY WHEN NEEDED.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • domestic help
  • smart home technologies
  • energy-efficient
  • resource depletion
  • over-dependence
  • external services
  • maintenance
  • replacements
  • leisure activities
  • tedious tasks
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