A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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letter to let you know that I am now in the same boat as you and now it's party time! You remember that restaurant you were talking about, I forgot its name. Yes, I am planning to throw a party at the same location. Now, since the venue has been decided, I want you to give me the best route to go there because me and dad tried to drive over to the place to check it out using Google Maps but guess where we ended up; a children's hospital . LOL. So, you have to be our wayfinder.

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to that, I am curious about what type of cuisines they do.

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, you were ranting about the semolina water balls that you tried, do you think we should do those for the starters ? You have to call me ASAP. And, you are coming. Pause. Cheers, Jass

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Include more details in your description of the party plans to fully meet the task requirements.

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Expand on the details related to the restaurant, such as the type of food, to enhance completeness.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are natural and appropriate, creating a friendly tone.

suitable writing tone

The letter is written with a suitable and friendly tone for a letter to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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