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Most of the people want to achieve a balance between work and other aspects of life but only a few of them are able to do so. What are the reasons behind failure to achieve a balance in this regard and what steps can be taken to improve this situation.

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Though attaining a good balance between
work
 and other attributes of
life
 has become a dream for most of the people doing jobs, only a few amongst them are fortunate enough to do so.A sense of fierce competition, poor management of workforce and workload and increased responsibilities of people towards their families
as a result
 of
emerging concept
Suggestion
the emerging concept
 of nuclear families are some of the main reasons to be blamed for
this
 and the government as well as the individuals need to step forward to improve
this
 state. Today's era is an era of competition
,
Accept space
,
especially, in terms of owning material things.
people
Suggestion
People
 tend to
work
 from dawn to dusk without getting enough time for enjoying other aspects of
life
 in
order
 to compete with their fellows or contemporaries and they even prefer to do overtime in
order
 to be able to keep pace with the norms of the society.
Secondly
, since most of the workplaces don't own enough workers, the people working there are made to
work
 relentlessly in
order
 to overcome the workload and maintain the
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
. Another reason to be blamed to snatch freedom to enjoy
life
 is the increasing responsibility of families on a single or at most two members of the family secondary to the emerging concept of nuclear families. In
order
 to make the people enjoy their lives and to make them able to keep
work
 and other attributes of
life
 at an equilibrium, government need to implement strict rules regarding working hours at a workplace. It should
also
 bring into existence a number of employment opportunities
at
Suggestion
in
 a workplace which will definitely result in minimizing the burden of
work
 on an individual worker. People must be taught about the values of things that actually matter in
life
instead
 of making them run after material things and they should be made to understand that the things compromising
happiness
Suggestion
the happiness
 of a person
(
Accept space
(
competition of getting wealthy
forinstance
Suggestion
for instance
)
Accept space
)
is actually not worth utilizing their time and energy on. Having said all
this
 it needs to be understood that
life
 should be spent not just running after material things and the worth of getting happiness in being content need to be understood by the individuals. Government needs to help the people by improving employment opportunities which will drag the workers out of the burden of doing
work
 round the clock and will make them able to enjoy other aspects of
life
 as well
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