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Some people say there is no need for print newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Almost in all scientific fields Today's world faces with a galloping progression, one of which is in the domain of e-communication. Without a shadow of a doubt, it hugely effects for broadcast-related issues, most of all on print newspapers. It brings about a polemical debate about whether the extinction of hard newspapers in tenable or not. Some certify that community no longer needs them. I to what extend go for it, while cannot shut my eyes on its benefits. On the one hand, those who are the proponent of obviation of traditional newspapers declare that when we can avail ourselves of technology,
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 there is no incumbent to hard newspapers, giving rise to some ecological matters. The more hard newspapers get published, the more trees should be cut down. By augmentation of population cutting down tend to be escalated, which negatively effecting on the environment. The other matter can relate to after publishing, meaning that we have to sort out these tremendous piles of newspapers.
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, part of them might reserve, others may use as fuel in factories and most of them should recycle.
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, there are people strongly advocating of print newspapers.
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 and foremost, there are even countries which engineering and applied science has not advanced in.
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, the people of these poor societies more or less have to exploit of customary newspapers. On top of
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, some, mostly older people, even have not had knowledge of using up-to-the-minute technologies, namely PC, laptop, smartphone, etc.
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, all of these conditions lead that to meet the need of society of news, the hard newspapers should be published. To recapitulate briefly, while there are some reasons for the elimination of the traditional newspaper, like hurting to environment and post-publishing problem. I think we have to put them out for reasons
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 as the paucity of science progression and inability to use of recent technology.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital revolution
  • sustainability
  • instantaneous
  • editorial integrity
  • demographic disparities
  • gatekeeping in journalism
  • nostalgic value
  • economic viability
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