Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio
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Improvement Suggestions
5Ensure each paragraph is centered around a single idea without digressing to maintain strong coherence and cohesion.
Use clear and purposeful paragraphing, utilizing a logical order of ideas (introduction, explanation, request, conclusion).
Make sure to include a proper closing salutation (e.g., 'Kind regards' or 'Sincerely') that matches the tone of the letter.
Complete the task effectively by covering all aspects: explaining the situation, expressing your feelings, and requesting action, which you did well.
Use a formal tone throughout the letter, avoiding any casual language. Ensure the tone of your letter matches the seriousness of the situation.