Last year many famous pop and sports stars earned millions of dollars each. Many other entertainment and sports personalities also have very high incomes.On the other hand,most people in ordinary professions like nurses, doctors and teachers earn only a small fraction of the incomes of these stars. What do you think about stars receiving very high salaries? IS IT fair that people with jobs that directly help people are paid much less? give reasons for your answer.

BASED ON PREVIOUS YEAR SURVEY, IT SEEMS THAT PEOPLE FROM ARTS FIELD LIKE FIML CELEBRITIES, SINGERS, DANCERS ETC GOT HIGH STIPEND.
IN CONTRAST
, MAIN STREAM PROFESSIONALS
SUCH
AS DOCTORS, NURSES, TEACHER WHO ARE HELPING PEOPLE IN VARIOUS ASPECT OF THEIR LIFE ARE GETTING TINY WAGE FOR THEIR WORK. WHAT I THINK IS THA, THAT STORTS AND OTHER PERSONALITIES ARE WORTH OF GETTING HIGE WAGES BUT
ALSO
IT IS UNFAIR TO RESPECTABLE PROFESSIONALS LIKE DOCTORS AND NURSES TO GET LESSER PAYCHEQUE.
THIS
ESSAY WILL DISCUSSE ABOUT WHY I THINK THAT ARTS PEOPLE ARE DESERVE TO GET HIGHER PAY AND HOW IT IS UNFAIR TO THE ADMIRABLE PEOPLE. TO START WITH, DUE TO VARIOUS REASONS WHY THEY EARN MORE THAN ANY OTHERS.
FIRSTLY
, BECAUSE OF THE HARD WORK THEY DO FOR THE PUBLIC SATISFACTION
.
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TO EXPLAIN, AFTER BECOMIG FAMOUS, PUBLIC DEMANDS BEST PERFORMANCE FROM THEM AND TO GIVE THAT THEY
ALSO
WORK VERY HARD.
AS A RESULT
, IN THE FEAR OF LOSSING PUBLIC INTEREST, THEIR AUTHORITY OFFERS THEM MORE MONEY. FOR AN EXAMPLE THE FAMOUS TV SHOW TARAK MEHTA IN INDIA, WHERE THE KNOW CHARACTOR WAS ON SRIKE AS THEIR DORECTOR WAS NOT GIVING HER ENOUGH COMPENSATION AS PER THE PUBLIC REVIEW. SO SHE QUITE THE SHOW UNTILL DIRECTOR AGREES. ONCE HE STATED THAT HE IS READY TO PAY AS MUCH AS SHE WANTS, SHE CAME BACK TO SHOW.
HOWEVER
,
THIS
SHOULD NOT HAPPEN BECAUSE THEY ARE JUST MAKING OUR LIFE BIT EASY BUT NOT EVERYONE USES
THIS
TO FRESHEN UP. IN THE OPPOSITE SIDE, I HAVE NUMEROUS CRUCIAL REASONS TO SAYS THAT IT IS NOT FAIR TO GET FRICTION AMOUNT OF REQUITAL FOR ORDINARY PROFESSIONAL. THE PRIME REASON IS THAT THEY HAD STRUGLED A LOT TO GET DEGREE AND CERTIFIED WITH THE LICENSE. IN EXPLANATION TO
THIS
, DURING THEIR STUDY THEY INVESTED A HUGE AMOUNT OF MONEY AND EVEN WORKED HARD FOR THE SUCCESS.
THUS
THEY SHOULD GET AT LEAST ENOUGH PAYMENT TO COMPANSATE.
MOREOVER
, THEY DOING A WORK IN RISKY ENVIRONMNET. IN BRIEF, THEY ARE WORKING WITH THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE SERIOUS DISEASES OR WHO ARE CHILDREN. SO WITH
THIS
WORK THEY ARE TAKING CHANCE OF THEIR OWN LIFE TOO.
THUS
I BELIEVE THEY IT IS TOTALLY WORTHY O PAY THEM HIGER SALARIES. FOR AN INSTANCE NURSES USED TO WORK WITH MANY PEOPLE LIKE AGED, SMALL CHILDREN,
THIS
PEOPLE USED TO HAVE SOME TYPE OF ILLNESS LIKE MENATLY RETARDER OR CONTGIOUS DISEASE LIKE TUBERCULOSIS ETC. WHICH ARE INFECTED ILLNESS BUT STILL THEY ARE DOING THEIR JOB WITH THEM. TO SUM UP, AFTER DISCUSING BOTH THE POINTS I THINK EVERY FIELD OR PERSONALITIES ARE WORTH OF GETTING GOOD REMITTANCE BASED ON THEIR DEDICATION AND DEVOTATION.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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