People of twenty-first century have better quality of life compared to those who lived in the previous centuries. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Modern generation people in twenty-
first
century
have an upgraded standard of living in comparison to people in past centuries. In my essay I would like to agree that in some of the aspects like healthcare
,
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,
communication
,
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,
transporataion
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
certainly it has
increased but
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increased, but
also
I would disagree that in terms of ecological balance it has not improved but deteriorated. With advances in
technology there
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technology, there
are outstanding achievements made during the twenty-
first
century
that has positively impacted standard of living across a plethora of areas in but I would like to discuss about three of
such
advances being healthcare
,
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,
communication
and transportation. 1) Health care
:
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:
With cutting edge research in
medical field
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the medical field
now humans are able to avail treatment and medicines for some of life
threatning
threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
diseases like malaria
,
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,
HIV
,
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,
cancer etc., and able to extend life expectancy which was not the case in
previous generation
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previous generations
the previous generation
a previous generation
2)
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2)
Communication
:
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:
I believe that one of the greatest achievements of
21st
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the 21st century
century
is evolution of
communication
between people across the world. Starting from early
communication
methods like morse code,telgram, telephone to modern day tools like internet calling, smartphones has decreased the gap between people and increased ease of living in many ways unimaginable in comparision to people in previous generations 3)Transportation: In current modern times there are various modes of transportation available based upon the amount of travel
time
people can make avail of transport like cars,buses,trains, ships and airplanes that would greatly reduce travel
time
and
also
more reliable and safe than previous generations Global warming is one the greatest threats to human race in twenty-
first
century
that is
caused by ecological imbalance that went unchecked during rapid expansion of modern society in the forms of pollution from industries, deforestation for human habitats , depletion of natural water resources etc.In past centuries there is always a balance between way of living and nature which is not the case now. In summary
,
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,
I would like to pen down that quality of living of people in twenty-
first
century
has increased across various
realms but
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realms, but
at the same
time
it has
also
increased threat to human life in terms of global warming
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of ecological imbalance. Regardless of people and
countries it
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countries, it
is now
time
for everyone to act and curtail global warming to secure living for future generations.
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