People of twenty-first century have better quality of life compared to those who lived in the previous centuries. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Modern generation people in twenty-

first

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have an upgraded standard of living in comparison to people in past centuries. In my essay I would like to agree that in some of the aspects like healthcare

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communication

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transporataion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

certainly it has

increased but

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increased, but

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I would disagree that in terms of ecological balance it has not improved but deteriorated. With advances in

technology there

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technology, there

are outstanding achievements made during the twenty-

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that has positively impacted standard of living across a plethora of areas in but I would like to discuss about three of

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advances being healthcare

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communication

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and transportation. 1) Health care

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With cutting edge research in

medical field

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the medical field

now humans are able to avail treatment and medicines for some of life

threatning

threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments

threatening

diseases like malaria

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HIV

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cancer etc., and able to extend life expectancy which was not the case in

previous generation

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previous generations

the previous generation

a previous generation

2)

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Communication

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I believe that one of the greatest achievements of

21st

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the 21st century

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is evolution of

communication

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between people across the world. Starting from early

communication

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methods like morse code,telgram, telephone to modern day tools like internet calling, smartphones has decreased the gap between people and increased ease of living in many ways unimaginable in comparision to people in previous generations 3)Transportation: In current modern times there are various modes of transportation available based upon the amount of travel

time

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people can make avail of transport like cars,buses,trains, ships and airplanes that would greatly reduce travel

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and

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more reliable and safe than previous generations Global warming is one the greatest threats to human race in twenty-

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that is

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caused by ecological imbalance that went unchecked during rapid expansion of modern society in the forms of pollution from industries, deforestation for human habitats , depletion of natural water resources etc.In past centuries there is always a balance between way of living and nature which is not the case now. In summary

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I would like to pen down that quality of living of people in twenty-

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has increased across various

realms but

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realms, but

at the same

time

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it has

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increased threat to human life in terms of global warming

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

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of ecological imbalance. Regardless of people and

countries it

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countries, it

is now

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for everyone to act and curtail global warming to secure living for future generations.