Blood sports (any spots involving Killing or shedding of blood as bull fighting, cockfighting or hunting)have become hot topic for debate in recent years.as society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed.blood sports should be banned.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

Advent of
blood
shedding games in which helpless animals are targeted for the entertainment of
masses
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the masses
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such
as bull Fighting, hunting,
cockfighting
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cock fighting
and many others have brought inhumanity and cruelty among the society towards these supernatural things
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are shown as
act
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an act
the act
acts
of uncivilized society and it should be under prohibition. I am in
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fulfill sexually
consummate
consumer
Accord with
given statement
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a given statement
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this
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This
essay will explicate my point of view. To commence with some factors which exhibit it as poor
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move towards
approach
appearance
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the predominant one is, every living organism has
equall
having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equal
right to live
on Earth whether
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on Earth, whether
it's human beings, animals or other
mamels
any warm-blooded vertebrate having the skin more or less covered with hair; young are born alive except for the small subclass of monotremes and nourished with milk
mammals
names
and
blood
shedding games are the most ubiquitous
menance
something that is a source of danger
menace
means
for all animal species which are getting extinct because of
this
cruel practice.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, animals are
also
having feelings and they feel uncontrollable pain while fighting for their lives in these bullfighting or cockfighting games.
This
inhuman act should be banned for the smooth running of the nature,
As a result
. Some might argue that human is superior as
comparison
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compared
with animals and fighting of animals in games provide them entertainment, simultaneously
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for many who host these shows of
blood
shedding games
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is the main source of earning but I,
however still
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however, still
assert that these actions towards animals show cruelty as that of so called superiority owing to
this
life of endangered species is
also
on the verge of extinction
for example
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tiger, Amos
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zebra so many
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it
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It
is
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,
therefore to
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therefore, to
eradicate
this problems
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this problem
these problems
these
adventurous
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adventure
games which are the sign of uncivilized society and human domination
,
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,
must be prohibited for the sake of nature. As per aforementioned information
,
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it can be
reitrated
to say, state, or perform again
reiterated
retracted
retorted
that government should
putforth
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put forth
same
preduit
commodities offered for sale
product
rules and regulations to muzzle these
blood
oozing games which are making the Human being aggressive and disgusting.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would like to suggest that government should keep an eagle eye on illegal supplies of animals in every zoos so that animals can be
perserved
prevented from decaying or spoiling and prepared for future use
preserved
perceived

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