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Universities should develop methods to support students who come from rural and disadvantageous backgrounds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The college attainment gap between rural and urban students is widening as disadvantaged students are unable to bear the expense of
university
education
.
Hence
, universities ought to follow certain methodologies that enable these students to acquire
university
education
.
Education
 plays a paramount role to achieve success in life and
therefore
, should be accessible to everyone. Unfortunately, students from economically backward areas are unable to pursue
university
education
 due to lack of financial resources.
Therefore
, universities could provide need-based scholarships to these students.
Furthermore
, they can make a provision to allocate certain percentage of seats for these less privileged
students which
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students, which
 would motivate and aid them to pursue
university
education
.
In addition
 to
this
, universities can provide free of cost distance learning classes as well as laptops and other study materials
to
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for
 these students when there is no seat available for on-campus admission.
This
 will allow
larger number
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a larger number
 of students to get
university degree
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a university degree
university degrees
 without worrying about the finances.
As a result
, more educated and
skillful
 people are produced in the socio-economically backward areas.
This
 would help
overall development
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the overall development
 of that area which
consequently
 will help in
nation’s prosperity
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the nation’s prosperity
. Some may argue that it is unfair for the urban students, if universities prioritize students from rural backgrounds as they feel
such
 initiatives could limit the funds and scholarships available to them.
However
, I think universities can tackle
this
 concern by balancing the funds and seats on
basis
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the basis
 of need and merits.
This
 will not hinder the
education
 of talented regular students as well as it will avail in poorer students to access
university
education
. In conclusion, I believe that universities should initiate various admission methodologies
such
 as funds, seat allocation and distance learning to assist underprivileged students to get higher
education
.

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