You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to let you know the issues that I have been facing of late at work.Since the day I started
this
new position I have not been able to learn much. Let me explain my situation in detail.Not only
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people in my team have not been familiarising me with the network system that we use but
also
if I try to consult any one of them no one seems to be able to set aside time to teach me,they're always overwhelmed by other things.But to my
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they find the time to go on social media and discuss issues they see there in the office for hours. When I joined the company as a network specialist I thought it met my expectations.
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you knew my goal was to learn the whole networking
codes
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in just a few weeks,but now I am 6 months into the job I have not learnt a single code.I expect to grow into a network guru since the company specialises in
this
area. Would you please have a discussion with my teammates in line with my concerns,so that I can
also
be happy and satisfied with
this
post that I am in
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If
this
can not work,I would appreciate being moved to another department that has more friendly and accommodating people. I look
forwading
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forwarding
to hearing from you,
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faithfully, Faith
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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