In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is important to consider old
age
people can live their ending Use synonyms
life
in old Use synonyms
age
homes. Nowadays who Use synonyms
are gets
old they prepared to live with old people due to nobody taking Suggestion
gets
is getting
care
at home. These kind of people depending on their family or government will provide some provision to pay their expenses. I will discuss more details in former view.
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Firstly
, No one taking Linking Words
care
of their old aged parents due to people become more money minded and busy with Use synonyms
there
professional of them or themselves
their
life
. Parents are depending on their Use synonyms
childrens
, but they are living far away from them. a young person of either sex
children
For example
, Parents are staying in India and kids are staying in abroad, Linking Words
then
who will Linking Words
taking
Suggestion
take
care
them. Most of the countries are paying pension to who has more than 60 years. So old people prepare to stay Use synonyms
at
old Suggestion
in
age
homes, due to medical facilities and same group people will give company to them day-to-day Use synonyms
life
. But kids responsibility to take Use synonyms
care
of their old Use synonyms
Use synonyms
age
parents. In Suggestion
aging
this
case Linking Words
children
must take Suggestion
the child
child
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care their old
aged parents in the later stage of the Suggestion
care in their old
life
. Use synonyms
Family
should pay all the expenses of their parents.
Suggestion
The family
Secondly
, some old people are alone staying at home like orphan. These people prefer to stay Linking Words
at
old Suggestion
in
age
homes. Use synonyms
For example
, If old Linking Words
age
people living as orphan, he or she no Use synonyms
earning
, a message informing of danger
warning
then
government need to give Linking Words
support
to them. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
age
people require happiness and Use synonyms
some one
should give love and a human being
someone
support
. Use synonyms
Government
will provide all the expenses and medical facilities for these people. Suggestion
The government
Nowadays so
many countries are providing all the medical facilities and pension for old aged orphans.
In the conclusion, old aged people who are having kids, they Accept comma addition
Nowadays, so
has
to take Suggestion
have
care
their Use synonyms
parents
expenses and give Suggestion
parents'
parent's
parent
support
to them at the later Use synonyms
age
, who are orphans government has to provide these kind of Use synonyms
support
. I will Use synonyms
support
both the cases.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite