An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear friend, Rob I hope
this
letter finds you well! I got to know that you are coming to India from Canada for two weeks through your letter. I am glad that you chose my country. I am here to help you with everything. For
two-week
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stay, the Taj
Hotel
is the best place as there are some discounts going on.
Moreover
,
this
hotel
is famous owing to its location as it is near to all the tourist attractions. If you book a
hotel
before two weeks, you will get free breakfast for 10 days.
Apart from
this
, I would like to suggest you some places that you must visit.
Firstly
, as you are interested in Sikhism, you should go to see the Golden Temple which is a
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temple located in Amritsar.
Secondly
, the Khalsa Museum in Anandpur is
also
a great place to know more about the history of Sikhism.
Moreover
, there is another museum named Jijilan Wala Baag
that is
near your
hotel
where you are staying
therefore
that is
also
worth visiting. I
also
want to give advice about the types of clothes that you should bring. As you know, in India, the weather is always hot, so I suggest you bring casual and comfortable clothes. I hope
this
letter will help you in your journey. Best regards, Simran
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task achievement
Consider providing more detailed advice on what to do, such as suggesting specific activities or experiences in each recommended place.
coherence cohesion
For an enhanced coherence, try linking ideas and paragraphs more smoothly with transitional phrases to guide the reader through your letter.
coherence cohesion
You included a greeting and closing in your letter, which adds a personal touch and is appropriate for the task.
task achievement
Your letter provides a clear response to the task's requirements: offering accommodation advice, suggesting places to visit, and advising on what clothes to bring.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accommodation
  • Landmarks
  • Museums
  • Cuisine
  • Historical
  • Forecast
  • Layers
  • Umbrella
  • Sunscreen
  • Itinerary
  • Hospitality
  • Leisure
  • Sightseeing
  • Cultural
  • Atmospheric
  • Seasonal
  • Day trip
  • Local events
  • Guesthouse
  • Warm layers
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