some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays mobile
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The nowadays mobile phone
phone
is necessary to
everyone. While some parents think mobile phones good to have with their children, but others argue that not to have mobile good idea. In Suggestion
for
this
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, an analytic or interpretive literary composition
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assay
i
will discuss both sides of the argument.
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Firstly
, today mobile phone
is neccessary
to every one in absolutely essential
necessary
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life style. If you kids having mobile is good and useful for certain tasks. Suggestion
day today
For example
, if your kids are running late from school or college you can track
them and any urgency directly call
them and convey the message. Suggestion
directly calls
Also
mobile phone
use for browse
study material as well as use for checking their bank info and required info.
But other hand, people using mobile Suggestion
browsing
phone
for useless purpose
like Suggestion
useless purposes
a useless purpose
chating
with unknown persons and wasting time with smart mobile phones. talk socially without exchanging too much information
chatting
For example
, they are using mobile for social media and other adult sites, then
children will get into wrong track
. Moreover
, nowaday
children are addicted to video games the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
in
mobile. Recently I heard the news, somebody is playing Suggestion
on
pudge
game and he Suggestion
Pudge
bridge
loose
his life due to the accident. So mobile usage should be in restricted mode.
In the conclusion, usage of mobile Suggestion
loses
lose
phone
have
some pros and cons, pros like keep Suggestion
has
track
the children and search useful material, other hand it will give result kids will go wrong track
. In my opinon
kids require a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
phone but
it should not smart Accept comma addition
phone, but
phone
. It will use for tracking and talking to parents.Submitted by Sreenivasulu on
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